Febuary 1st-Happiness

Ok,so (may not be that dissapointing) I haven’t been able to post my drawings yet,so in return I’ll post the first preview of The Darkness-my anime(this is the begining of the first chapter)in story form.Don’t be afraid to critisize or leave a comment of suggestion.(WARNING-MAY STILL SUCK)So…here we go

                                                                        _The_

                                                                  _Darkness_

                                                                            1

                                                  The sweet,homely scent of Summer shivered through his nostrils.The wind calmly brushed past his face,the grass fluttering under his relaxed body.The puffy clouds slithered gracefully across the deep blue sky,the sun glinting brightly.His white,somewhat spikey hair swashed gently with the current of the air.His thin,cotton shirt and his baggy,leather shorts flowing with it.His head resting on his arms,folded loosely on the shifting grass.The sun reflected onto his tanned,peach skin,tightly fitting on his exposed bones.His blue-green,slightly closed eyes drifted with the clouds,relaxingly staring at the beautiful painting in front of him.He smiled,Even though it’s a twisted world..it’s also utterly beautiful…I love it….

                                              

                                                      “Izake!!”

Izake lifted his head and looked over the hill that he lay on.A thin boy,wearing an orange,leather jacket,zipped almost all the way up to his neck,and brown,leather shorts stumbled up the hill as he called Izake’s name.Izake reluctantly stood up and grumbled,”What is it,Midath?”Midath wheezed and took a slight pause to get his breath back.”I-it’s…it’s Eurous..He’s in trouble,we have to hurry!”Midath studdered as he supported himself on his hands and knees.”Eurous?!What’s the matter with him?!”Izake questioned intenly.”Just,follow me-I’ll explain on the way..”

                                          ”What?!” Izake bellowed as he sprinted down the grassy hills,the dirt flying beneath his weathered,black,canvas shoes.”Yeah,I know-I’d tried to stop them…but there was too many of them-Eurous just told me to find you-so I did..I don’t know what his condition is now..”Midath said disapointingly.Izake just nodded.”I know Eurous can take it-he’ll last..at least ’till we get there.”

                                                A boy,about twelve,flew backwards-his face perched-extremely red and purple.He slammed against the ground,his head bouncing from the ground and knocking back into it.In front of him,three teenagers,dressed in black,leather jackets and shorts-with chains wrapped around their arms.They all looked similar,short,red hair and orange skin.The one,the leader,that had hit him laughed harshly.”I told you-give me your gold and I won’t kill you but..you just keep refusing to hand it over..Either you be dead or alive-I’m getting your gold…”he chuckled.Eurous just frowned.”I’m…I’m not handing over anything-especially to you!”he studdered as he desperately tried to rise.The leader’s brown eyes widened.His face became furious.He pelted towards the crumpled Eurous.”Argh,you stupid-…..DIE!”he screamed as he drew a glistening knife.

                                A ringing sound emphisized through the air as the leader’s knife flew and spun through the air and sank into the dirt.The leader shook violently as his surprised face stared intently at the boy in front of him,holding his wrist,with a huge grin on his face.”You mind leavin’ my friend alone?”Izake said with a sneer.The leader still shook..”W-whaat?!” Izake continued to grin.”Hmph…now,let’s get to it..”he said as he thrust his fist right into the leader’s stomach.The leader flew back,mouth agape.He slid across the ground violently.The two other rushed towards Izake,themselves holding knives.Izake twisted around,holding his palms out,slicing both of their chests with them.They twirled backwards-landing face first into the ground.”You okay,Eurous?”asked Izake as he tilted his head to Eurous.”Yeah…almost came too late.”Eurous said with a grin.

                                 Relifous-a beautiful city with its huge,white,marble castles and buildings scrunched up into black,cobblestone streets.Children and orphans alike played in the plazas and streets with the thought of becoming a Knight of Relyfe filling their heads.A whole other world seperated from the rest…an island floating on the sky.A dreamland.Everyone considers it to be that,as do three boys browsing across the streets.”How did you get to be that strong,Izake?”Eurous asked with real question in his words.Izake just smiled and looked over to Eurous and Midath.”I try to get stronger to protect this world……this world of sorrow…..this world of hate….this of world of lies….this world of darkness……..this world….that I love.”

2 Responses to “Febuary 1st-Happiness”

  1. Itadakimasu! A noble attempt, and I really like it! Send it my way for grammatical correction and it’s perfect. I didn’t read it all…but when you come over we’ll work on it! Of course…as long as I’m not playing your ps2 to death…

  2. Oh, and thank you very much for the post. It made me worry a lot less… if you want, you can do another. I added a link to your blog on the post, so hopefully you’ll be getting more visits.

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